sricctv

Hi Guys I'm new to CCTV and my boss told me to design a CCTV system to our company and create a tender document for it. then i prepared it. but I'm not sure it is 100% person correct can you help e with errors on this document. I attached specification and tender document to my blog techmans.blogspot.com/2014/09/specification-for-complete-ip-cctv.html